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Challenge#1 Between myself and 
The challenge was to take the characters we made last class session and draw each others character in our own character's action pose from our final sheets.
So here is her character Rena Leradine [link] in Hokori's [link] action pose.
I will post her critique below when she gets around to it. Part of the challenge is to hard core critique the resulting image.
The challenge was to take the characters we made last class session and draw each others character in our own character's action pose from our final sheets.So here is her character Rena Leradine [link] in Hokori's [link] action pose.
I will post her critique below when she gets around to it. Part of the challenge is to hard core critique the resulting image.
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4000x4500px 2.34 MB
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Comment:I love the pose you chose for my character! You have made great use of the color palette, and very well displayed motion, with both the pose and the secondary motions of the clothing and accessories. I can understand how capturing the lightness of the fabric of her pants can be hard, and though they still display a smidge heavy, you still did a great job. I'm trying to figure out for sure where the light source is coming from; maybe try (and this is something I should have done, too) building an environment around the character to complete the story and create a definite light source(s). It would have also made more of an impact to the final piece.
Overall, I think this is awesome! We both need to make improvements.
As soon as you post your critique, I'll set the standards for our next challenge. 
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